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It’s ok to be unsure and lean on someone
It’s fine to say you don’t know – even though you do
We’re all incomplete and aspiring for greatness
We’re all lost and wandering blind
It’s ok

It’s ok, don’t cry
Stand here by me – we’ll take it together
I’ll spread the warmth to all those who ask
We all need help from another
It’s ok

Everything will turn out – you’ll see
There’s still a sparkle in your eyes
You haven’t left us yet – you’ve just arrived
It’s fine to be tired – yearn for a shoulder to rest on
It’s ok

Don’t try to take life alone
There are too many dead heroes
Stand by us and lean on us – we don’t mind
We’re your friends and we want to help
It’s ok

You can’t take life alone
Find someone to fight for!
Let their memory warm your darkest thoughts
Let their presence set your soul ablaze
It’s ok
©2003-2009 ~darkness-kills
:icondarkness-kills:

Author's Comments

uh...well, i just kinda wrote this...i wasn't thinking about anything really...complete disregard for syntax..no rhyme...just me thinking on paper i suppose :O_o:

I dunno if i like this...i think i do...but i wasn't paying attentino to how it came out, so blah.

enjoy..or not...tell me how i can make it better if you hate it :thumbsup:

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:iconton-dieu-noir:
:D i m all warm and tingly inside ^_^ :uh: you're the best, this is an awesome poem!!

--
You stare at me like I'm a vitamen, on the surface you hate but you know you want me.
:icondarkness-kills:
yay! glad you liked :heart: :D
:licking:

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Imagination is a quality given to a man to compensate him for what he is not, and a sense of humor was provided to console him for what he is.
~Oscar Wilde
:iconanwenhwesta:
wow.. awesome for "just thinking on paper"
you're right, too many dead heroes.. so why do i always try to tackle things alone? *smacks self* should know better by now..
double :#1: for you!

--
all that is gold does not glitter
not all those who wander are lost
the road that once begun is bitter
yet the reward is beyond all costs
:iconpunkified:
i like vvery vvery mooch!!:) i love the way you keep saying it's okay cuz you may have notice my inner child has resurfaced and it's nice to heaar that its okay. really nice peace
:icondarkness-kills:
thanks:) it's nice to get comments from you and J, and everyone else for that matter...you guys rule:!:

You gotta comfort the inner child...it's who you are :)

--
Imagination is a quality given to a man to compensate him for what he is not, and a sense of humor was provided to console him for what he is.
~Oscar Wilde
:iconpunkified:
you can ask jack i am the child!! neva acted any other way and vouldn't change it!! yahyah hug:
:icondarkness-kills:
yay!! I got me message across :) I'm just generally making a plea for my friends not to try and tackle things alone...i'm here for them ^_^ (you too...if you need help :) :hug:)

thanks for the comment :thumbsup:

--
Imagination is a quality given to a man to compensate him for what he is not, and a sense of humor was provided to console him for what he is.
~Oscar Wilde
:icondarkness-kills:
^_^ go inner child!! er..*ahem* yesss, it's vonderful zat you are so happy...ve love you alex :D :hug:

--
Imagination is a quality given to a man to compensate him for what he is not, and a sense of humor was provided to console him for what he is.
~Oscar Wilde
:iconpunkified:
wowo (with the arms) thank you for loving me i love youv twvo!! very very good attemp on de axcent!! so you admit their is more then one of you??:licking: hah i new i mean i newv it vas youv:slow:

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